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A small shoe in a pool of blood,
His tiny finger prints scarred the mud.
The one I held dear to my heart,
Is now gone, his body ripped apart.
Now dead my one and only son,
There was nothing I could have done.
Helplessly I lay,
As night turned into day,
Wanting to hear one last time,
The title that I never wanted to be mine,
But now I wish to hear,
Your soft wisper in my ear.
"Good night daddy" As you kiss me on the cheek,
Every night of every week.
From your annoying whine, to your contaigous laugh,
With out you I am only half.
So tell me what I have to do,
To make my simple wish come true.
I want you back with me, never to leave my side,
So that together one day we can watch the tide.
Now fourteen years later, you have answered my prayer,
Precious moments we can now share.
But some day I must go,
To a place that I know.
For now it is my time to say good night,
But do not worry, and do not fright.
Although your feelings for me twist and bend,
Good bye my son, I love you untill the very end.
                               
                                   - Kratos
©2008-2009 ~ItachiTheDekuScrub
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Author's Comments

This is a poem about Kratos, and his years with Lloyd untill he leaves to Derris-Karlan. I have got to admit, this is the longest poem I have ever done. Enjoy and comment. I own nothing.

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Except for a few typos this is pretty nice. Reminds me of how I feel about my mom.

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Faith is hope without the doubt but with all the trust

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Then you rose into my life
Like a promised sunrise.
Brightening my days with the light in your eyes.
I've never been so strong.
Now I'm where I belong.
~Maya Angelou
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I love the ending, it's so sad. Great job Wolfie-chan!

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Don't come near me when I am hungry... It may be your last moments on Earth!!! O_0
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OMG i love this so much!!!! its so amazing!

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I'll give you this strawberry if you keep it a secret, Okay?
~L
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Places u'l find me
[link] [link] [link] [link] [link]
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Thanks!

And thanks for the fave

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Everything I touch turns to ashes~ Slips right through my hands~
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of course!!

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I'll give you this strawberry if you keep it a secret, Okay?
~L
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Places u'l find me
[link] [link] [link] [link] [link]
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That... is so sweet. I love it.

*kicks Kratos for leaving* Stupid Kratos...

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{o,o}
|)__)
-"-"-

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Sex is like math...

You add the bed, subtract the clothes, divide the legs, leave your solution, and pray you don't multiply.
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Thanks! ^^ And thanks for the fave~

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Everything I touch turns to ashes~ Slips right through my hands~
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You're quite welcome. ^.^

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{o,o}
|)__)
-"-"-

:music::shamrock::star::flame::music:

Sex is like math...

You add the bed, subtract the clothes, divide the legs, leave your solution, and pray you don't multiply.

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